As Promised…

As promised in December post, I’ve had ago at writing a male version of the poem featured.

Let me know what you think of my effort!

She didn’t like my flat pack skills
She didn’t like my DIY,
She said my decorating was too messy
Not like her Fathers used to be.
I didn’t empty the bins quite right
She says the gardens a disgrace,
I didn’t weed the borders
The way her Father used to do.
I thought about it long and hard
Wondering what I should do,
Then I got up and went to the pub
Just like her father used to do!

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